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The Query Trenches: 10 hints for the brave

7/31/2020

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Querying a literary agent is scary. 

There's so much to think about BEFORE you bravely send that first fiction submission. But, with a bit of patience and planning, querying can be a manageable, less terrifying (maybe enjoyable?) experience.

Hints for the brave:

1. Be prepared. Do not send a query before your fiction manuscript is fully drafted, edited, and proofed. I've heard so many stories of writers sending out queries (or getting a like during #PitMad) before a manuscript is ready. This creates a panic if an agent requests more. Though a  manuscript may not be perfect, it should be as polished as you can make it. Assuming an agent or editor will "clean up" the missing commas or misspelled words is a recipe for rejection.

2. Know what might be asked of you next. When requesting a full or partial, some agents may also ask for a synopsis, comp authors or titles, or even a marketing plan. Don't be blindsided by these requests. Before submitting, write a 1-2 page synopsis (yes, I hate writing them, too, but it's got to be done). Also, have some sense of who your target market is, what authors you may be compared to, specific titles your book could sit beside on the shelf, etc.

3. Do your research. Always consider the agent's agency website to be the most reliable source of information about how to submit. Regardless of what an agent may say about submissions anywhere else (Publishers Marketplace, a magazine interview, etc.), it is completely safe to indicate in your query "Per the submission guidelines posted on Totally Awesome Agency's website, I am submitting blah, blah, blah." No one will fault you, if you follow the agency website guidelines.

4. Visit the Manuscript Wishlist website. This super helpful website includes the current "wishlists" of agents and editors. Not all agents utilize the site, but it's a great way to search specifically for those who are looking for what you are submitting. Many agents update these listings more frequently and show more of their personality and literature tastes on this site than they do on their actual agency sites. 

5. Make a wishlist of your own. Not all agents are created equal. You should want an agent as much as he or she wants you, so be sure to compile a list of the agents you are considering and even rank them. An agent that I think is a "perfect" fit (offers a helpful writing blog, represents bestsellers in my genre, seeks a story about complicated families, was an only child, enjoys baseball, likes dogs, or whatever) goes to the top of my list. If an agent sounds like a good fit, but I don't know enough to tell for sure, I put the name further down. If an agent doesn't divulge much about interests but represents my genre, he or she goes to the bottom of the list. Those at the bottom may actually be a fantastic option, but, until I can dig up more information, I just don't know.

6. Create a master spreadsheet. Taking your agent list, create a spreadsheet to include basics such as agent name (last, first), rank, agency name, agency contact info/web/address, agent contact email, submission requirements (query + 5 pages, synopsis, etc.), submission email or online form, submission date, response date, request for F/P, notes. Because I like to write for a variety of ages, I also include checkboxes for what an agent represents (PB, M, YA, NA, A). Feel free to use this PDF or customize this Excel doc for your own needs. 

7. Consider creating a Submissions Only email. Some writers create a "Submissions Only" email address, used strictly for sending and receiving queries/responses, so the chance of a "request for full" from an agent doesn't get lost in a glut of spam, client communications, and Barnes & Noble ads.

8. Be strategic with the first batch. When submitting a new project, I usually start small (about half a dozen). I choose 2 agents from my highest ranked, 2 from my middle ranked, and 2 from my lowest ranked. This gives me a nice cross-section. I also choose agents who have slightly different submission guidelines. Of the half dozen, I select at least a couple who only want a query letter (no sample), so I can gauge if my query, alone, is working. The rest of my queries go to a strategic mix of agents who ask for 5 sample pages, 10 pages, or, sometimes, 20 pages (early on, I prefer submitting fewer sample pages). Again, my goal is to see what gets someone's attention, so I can adapt my strategy or even edit my manuscript, if need be.

9. Stay organized and document results. Print out your master spreadsheet and color code agents (I use sticky notes I can move around — yellow indicates outstanding submissions, green indicates request for F/P, red indicates rejection). Be sure to document submission dates and response dates, as soon as they go out or come in. When an agent sends me a final rejection, I print it and file it.

10. Look forward to the rejections. Rejections are not something to dread. They can give you a great deal of information (particularly if you're lucky enough to get a personal response vs. a form letter). Rejections allow you to move on to the next agent on your list. Again, the goal is to find an agent who wants you as much as you want them. Getting a rejection means you weren't a perfect fit. I try to replace every rejection I receive with a new submission, so there is always something out. Know who you will send to next and be prepared for the long haul. It could take 2 queries or 200 before a particular project gets picked up (or put in a drawer for another time). Even if it's a "no," learn something from the process.

Yes, querying a literary agent is scary. But news—ANY news—is a step forward. You can't get a publishing deal without putting yourself, and your work, out there.

Be brave ... and query on!

​As always, thanks for the artwork, Michelle Haas.

#amquerying #WIP #fiction #WednesdayWisdom #WritingCommunity

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Why hire a writing professional? Plumbers replace pipes, and roofers replace shingles. That's why.

7/20/2020

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Why hire a writing professional?

I get that question a lot.

What IS the point in hiring a writing professional when social media and drop-in, "insta-website" design programs make it so easy for business owners and non-profit entities to cut out the middleman and get the word out themselves? 

Better questions: Would a plumber replace the shingles on your roof? Would a roofer replace a leaky pipe?

Staying in one's lane is the key. Writers write. That's what they do.


​artwork by Michelle Haas

Benefits of Using a Writing Professional

  1. Staying in a Professional Lane — A plumber fixes leaky pipes. A roofer replaces shingles. A professional writer can fill a communications void far better than a non-writer with no training. Just as one would have a medical doctor set a broken bone, one should hire a writer for a writing project. A writer writes. That's what they do.
  2. Positive First Impressions — nothing has more weight than a customer's first impression. If that first impression includes a typo in the first paragraph on the landing page of the company website, the first impression (a poor one) could be the difference between a sale and a pass. Professionally generated communications provide a positive first impression and may also encourage the media/public to trust the source and look forward to future communications. 
  3. Consistent Messaging — Professionally generated materials used in local news outlets, social media, and/or a website should present a consistent message and singular view of an organization’s brand. A writing professional may analyze existing materials to identify how a company is lacking in brand messaging and to offer solutions to patch those holes.
  4. Proactive Approach — a professional can put the organization’s best foot forward in a positive, timely manner during a crisis and/or a time of celebration. The organization leads the dissemination of information via the professional, allowing for a proactive approach rather than a reactive approach. 
  5. Time — time is money and far too precious. Allowing a professional writer to take on communications responsibilities frees up valuable time for a business owner or organization leader to do what he or she does best. 
  6. Cost — freelance writers/editors are fairly reasonable, when you look at the big picture. They may be hired for one-time projects or periodical needs (such as monthly press releases and blog posts). Writers often don't require an on-site work space or expect medical insurance, and hourly rates vary so widely, there is a freelancer for every budget.

I've been writing for small businesses, large corporations, non-profit organizations, and private entities for a very, very long time. Over the years, I've seen just about every kind of client, but my favorite (with whom I am overly loyal, give my lowest rates, and continue to work with time and again) is the client who works as hard as I do at his or her own respective job and who recognizes my professionalism in my own writerly lane. Just as my client is an expert in his or her field, I am an expert in mine. 

Why hire a writing professional?

​Because you wouldn't hire a plumber to put shingles on your roof.

**as always, thanks for the artwork, Michelle Haas.

#amwriting #freelance #Writer #WritingCommunity #businesswriting #WriteStuff #PowerOfPages #WIP 
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    Brenda Haas lived in the Pittsburgh, PA area for over 20 years and moved to Lake Erie with her husband in early 2018. She has two grown daughters and way too many pets.

    A columnist for Pittsburgh area's Penn Franklin News Publishing Company, her "A Little Bit of Life" essays provided a snapshot of being a parent, wife and independent woman who attracts the "quirky" in everyday living. She has also been published in the Pittsburgh Post-Gazette, the Pittsburgh Tribune-Review, and My Outer Banks Home magazine.

    Brenda currently freelances for various businesses and non-profits and is well-versed in public relations and marketing.

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