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Experience your settings

8/28/2018

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I have discovered there is no substitute for experiencing a setting, up close and personal, before writing about it, particularly if one is writing fiction. Granted, I've sought out some less than common settings — take, for instance, the fine morning I sat in on my first-ever judge's hearing.

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NOTES in my setting journal:

L-shaped, elevated desk. Cheap, dark, wood paneling. Room size: approx. 15 x 25. Row of high windows. Stained (???) carpeting and padded chairs. Scuffed linoleum floor. Neon lighting (not all working).

BUSY. Many people in/out. Buzz of voices. Side conversations between attorneys/players/government employees.

Judge: cross between silver-haired character from Knot's Landing/Norm from Cheers. Glasses perched low on bulbous nose (drinker?). Black robes w/tennis shoes.

Prosecutor: Female. Short fire hydrant. Dark hair w/shots of silver. UGLY, orange, nubby sweater under black jacket. Black pencil skirt. Black flats. No makeup.

Defense Attorney: Tall, 50-ish. Tan. Mustache. Well-made dark suit. Power tie. Itchy pants? Constantly adjusting himself.

Overheard:
Defense Attorney: "... stuff we have to sign?"
Judge: "Well, 'stuff' is better than sayin' shit, I suppose (laughs)."

Overheard: (mantra said every time someone new came in)
Judge: "Welcome to District Court."
Lawyer: "Morning, Your Honor. Thank you for the salutation."

Best judge's quote: "You can do the right thing all day. If it doesn't look right to other people, well, you know..."

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Researching settings online is certainly worth the time and sometimes the only option a writer has. However, experiencing settings, when possible, gives a writer SOOOO much more detail (and juicy quotes) to work with when fleshing out fiction. It can bring a rich description, ripe with all the senses, to the manuscript. It lets the setting really come to life on the page.

WRITING CHALLENGE:

Keep a setting journal with you at all times. When next in one of the below "unusual" settings, jot down what you see, hear, smell, touch, etc. Write a short story using one or more of these settings.

A Baker's Dozen of Interesting Settings
1. Gas station
2. Bar
3. School gym during a sporting event
4. Doctor's office (other other medical professional)
5. Church
6. Park
7. Swim/water area such as a water park, pond, fishing hole, etc.
8. Cafeteria or soup kitchen
9. Coffee shop or cafe
10. Barbershop or hair salon
11. Casino
12. Grocery store
13. Library

Good luck and happy writing!

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    Brenda Haas is currently a feature writer for Leisure Living Magazine, covering the Shores & Islands Ohio region. She also freelances for nonprofits and is well-versed in public relations, marketing, and editing. She spent many years as a reporter and columnist for a Pittsburgh press. Her writing has appeared in Pittsburgh Tribune-Review, Pittsburgh Post-Gazette, and My Outer Banks Home magazine, among other publications.

    Brenda lived in the Pittsburgh, PA area for more than 20 years. She now resides in Lakeside, OH, a circa-1870s Lake Erie community attracting generations of annual vacationers, artists, and educators. It serves as the vintage setting for her debut novel — Finding Sutton’s Choice (Orange Hat Publishing/Ten16 Press, release May 2025).

    Works-in-Progress
    Women's Fiction:
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    - Here or There on Beddington Bluff

    Young Adult:
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    - Forest for the Trees


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