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The Query Trenches: 10 hints for the brave

7/31/2020

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Querying a literary agent is scary. 

There's so much to think about BEFORE you bravely send that first fiction submission. But, with a bit of patience and planning, querying can be a manageable, less terrifying (maybe enjoyable?) experience.

Hints for the brave:

1. Be prepared. Do not send a query before your fiction manuscript is fully drafted, edited, and proofed. I've heard so many stories of writers sending out queries (or getting a like during #PitMad) before a manuscript is ready. This creates a panic if an agent requests more. Though a  manuscript may not be perfect, it should be as polished as you can make it. Assuming an agent or editor will "clean up" the missing commas or misspelled words is a recipe for rejection.

2. Know what might be asked of you next. When requesting a full or partial, some agents may also ask for a synopsis, comp authors or titles, or even a marketing plan. Don't be blindsided by these requests. Before submitting, write a 1-2 page synopsis (yes, I hate writing them, too, but it's got to be done). Also, have some sense of who your target market is, what authors you may be compared to, specific titles your book could sit beside on the shelf, etc.

3. Do your research. Always consider the agent's agency website to be the most reliable source of information about how to submit. Regardless of what an agent may say about submissions anywhere else (Publishers Marketplace, a magazine interview, etc.), it is completely safe to indicate in your query "Per the submission guidelines posted on Totally Awesome Agency's website, I am submitting blah, blah, blah." No one will fault you, if you follow the agency website guidelines.

4. Visit the Manuscript Wishlist website. This super helpful website includes the current "wishlists" of agents and editors. Not all agents utilize the site, but it's a great way to search specifically for those who are looking for what you are submitting. Many agents update these listings more frequently and show more of their personality and literature tastes on this site than they do on their actual agency sites. 

5. Make a wishlist of your own. Not all agents are created equal. You should want an agent as much as he or she wants you, so be sure to compile a list of the agents you are considering and even rank them. An agent that I think is a "perfect" fit (offers a helpful writing blog, represents bestsellers in my genre, seeks a story about complicated families, was an only child, enjoys baseball, likes dogs, or whatever) goes to the top of my list. If an agent sounds like a good fit, but I don't know enough to tell for sure, I put the name further down. If an agent doesn't divulge much about interests but represents my genre, he or she goes to the bottom of the list. Those at the bottom may actually be a fantastic option, but, until I can dig up more information, I just don't know.

6. Create a master spreadsheet. Taking your agent list, create a spreadsheet to include basics such as agent name (last, first), rank, agency name, agency contact info/web/address, agent contact email, submission requirements (query + 5 pages, synopsis, etc.), submission email or online form, submission date, response date, request for F/P, notes. Because I like to write for a variety of ages, I also include checkboxes for what an agent represents (PB, M, YA, NA, A). Feel free to use this PDF or customize this Excel doc for your own needs. 

7. Consider creating a Submissions Only email. Some writers create a "Submissions Only" email address, used strictly for sending and receiving queries/responses, so the chance of a "request for full" from an agent doesn't get lost in a glut of spam, client communications, and Barnes & Noble ads.

8. Be strategic with the first batch. When submitting a new project, I usually start small (about half a dozen). I choose 2 agents from my highest ranked, 2 from my middle ranked, and 2 from my lowest ranked. This gives me a nice cross-section. I also choose agents who have slightly different submission guidelines. Of the half dozen, I select at least a couple who only want a query letter (no sample), so I can gauge if my query, alone, is working. The rest of my queries go to a strategic mix of agents who ask for 5 sample pages, 10 pages, or, sometimes, 20 pages (early on, I prefer submitting fewer sample pages). Again, my goal is to see what gets someone's attention, so I can adapt my strategy or even edit my manuscript, if need be.

9. Stay organized and document results. Print out your master spreadsheet and color code agents (I use sticky notes I can move around — yellow indicates outstanding submissions, green indicates request for F/P, red indicates rejection). Be sure to document submission dates and response dates, as soon as they go out or come in. When an agent sends me a final rejection, I print it and file it.

10. Look forward to the rejections. Rejections are not something to dread. They can give you a great deal of information (particularly if you're lucky enough to get a personal response vs. a form letter). Rejections allow you to move on to the next agent on your list. Again, the goal is to find an agent who wants you as much as you want them. Getting a rejection means you weren't a perfect fit. I try to replace every rejection I receive with a new submission, so there is always something out. Know who you will send to next and be prepared for the long haul. It could take 2 queries or 200 before a particular project gets picked up (or put in a drawer for another time). Even if it's a "no," learn something from the process.

Yes, querying a literary agent is scary. But news—ANY news—is a step forward. You can't get a publishing deal without putting yourself, and your work, out there.

Be brave ... and query on!

​As always, thanks for the artwork, Michelle Haas.

#amquerying #WIP #fiction #WednesdayWisdom #WritingCommunity

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Why hire a writing professional? Plumbers replace pipes, and roofers replace shingles. That's why.

7/20/2020

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Why hire a writing professional?

I get that question a lot.

What IS the point in hiring a writing professional when social media and drop-in, "insta-website" design programs make it so easy for business owners and non-profit entities to cut out the middleman and get the word out themselves? 

Better questions: Would a plumber replace the shingles on your roof? Would a roofer replace a leaky pipe?

Staying in one's lane is the key. Writers write. That's what they do.


​artwork by Michelle Haas

Benefits of Using a Writing Professional

  1. Staying in a Professional Lane — A plumber fixes leaky pipes. A roofer replaces shingles. A professional writer can fill a communications void far better than a non-writer with no training. Just as one would have a medical doctor set a broken bone, one should hire a writer for a writing project. A writer writes. That's what they do.
  2. Positive First Impressions — nothing has more weight than a customer's first impression. If that first impression includes a typo in the first paragraph on the landing page of the company website, the first impression (a poor one) could be the difference between a sale and a pass. Professionally generated communications provide a positive first impression and may also encourage the media/public to trust the source and look forward to future communications. 
  3. Consistent Messaging — Professionally generated materials used in local news outlets, social media, and/or a website should present a consistent message and singular view of an organization’s brand. A writing professional may analyze existing materials to identify how a company is lacking in brand messaging and to offer solutions to patch those holes.
  4. Proactive Approach — a professional can put the organization’s best foot forward in a positive, timely manner during a crisis and/or a time of celebration. The organization leads the dissemination of information via the professional, allowing for a proactive approach rather than a reactive approach. 
  5. Time — time is money and far too precious. Allowing a professional writer to take on communications responsibilities frees up valuable time for a business owner or organization leader to do what he or she does best. 
  6. Cost — freelance writers/editors are fairly reasonable, when you look at the big picture. They may be hired for one-time projects or periodical needs (such as monthly press releases and blog posts). Writers often don't require an on-site work space or expect medical insurance, and hourly rates vary so widely, there is a freelancer for every budget.

I've been writing for small businesses, large corporations, non-profit organizations, and private entities for a very, very long time. Over the years, I've seen just about every kind of client, but my favorite (with whom I am overly loyal, give my lowest rates, and continue to work with time and again) is the client who works as hard as I do at his or her own respective job and who recognizes my professionalism in my own writerly lane. Just as my client is an expert in his or her field, I am an expert in mine. 

Why hire a writing professional?

​Because you wouldn't hire a plumber to put shingles on your roof.

**as always, thanks for the artwork, Michelle Haas.

#amwriting #freelance #Writer #WritingCommunity #businesswriting #WriteStuff #PowerOfPages #WIP 
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Is it done yet? Until I change my mind.

6/22/2020

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Is it done yet? 

The question seems ridiculous, really. 

When speaking about his or her own work, you'd think a writer would know the answer to those four little words strung together. They make up an important, terrifying sentence, with so much weight and worry attached.

Is it done yet?

No idea.

Probably.

At least for now.

Maybe. Maybe not. Probably not.

I've read many blogs on the subject of knowing when your manuscript is complete and ready for submission. Most of them state the obvious. When you've got nothing more to say, you're done. When you've got nothing more to say and have proofed it...you're done. When you've got nothing more to say, have proofed it, and have had a professional editor proof it...you're done.

That's all well and good, but I could look at a professionally edited, already published, "bought and paid for" news article, blog, manuscript, or other personal work from years ago, and would likely still find something to change about my own writing, in that moment. When it comes to the written word, my mind doesn't embrace absolutes. I don't shut off the valve of creativity the moment I write "the end." I continue to tinker with my work in my head for days, months, even years later. At any moment, I might change my mind. I might pick a different ending. I might tweak a sentence, or two, or 200.

And it's okay to be that unsure. It's my work, and I get to decide whether to leave it alone or change it...again.

Maybe I'm feeling a bit feisty and want to go for that snarky tone, because someone just ticked me off.

Or, maybe I'm feeling nostalgic and want to add a flutter of a memory.

Or, maybe I'm feeling silly and mysterious. Maybe I'm feeling dour and prophetic. Maybe I'm feeling tired or euphoric.

All those maybes could change my own perception of my work. 

The point I'm trying to make is that it's okay if a writer doesn't feel confident in "the end." Frankly, the ending might change tomorrow, when a writer suddenly has a moment of clarity. 

Don't get me wrong. I'm not remotely a wishy-washy person—not in my writing and certainly not in my life. I submit work under deadline on a weekly basis, confident in the knowledge that I have submitted my best work possible, in that moment. I wouldn't do it any other way. That doesn't mean it can't be (or won't be) improved upon by myself or an editor or a client. Sometimes, my work goes untouched by an editor's red pen, and it's "done"—perfect, even—in my client's eyes. Sometimes, I wish I'd had more time with that same piece, because I know I could do better. But that would be for me. I've learned, over the years, those are the projects I have to let go. If the client is happy, then I need to move on. I need to be done, too.

Is it done yet?

Probably not, but it's as done as it's going to be, until I have a good reason to change my mind about it.

We all want perfection. And most of us don't see that perfection in our own work.

A writer, particularly one who may be new to writing or doesn't have a lot of confidence in his or her ability to come to a "perfect" conclusion, should never feel guilty or novice for finding it hard to find "the end." If you are questioning yourself, you're not a bad writer or alone in that indecision. You're just like everyone else. Your mind is still working...churning out those other artistic choices. 

Is it done yet?

Sure, if that's what you want to call it.

My manuscript is done, too. 

Until I change my mind.

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As always, thanks to Michelle Haas for the cool artwork.

#amwriting #WIP #amquerying #amdone #amsodone #WritingCommunity #writingtips #MondayMotivation #MotivationMonday
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Tips for writing realistic, colorful characters

4/27/2020

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Tips for writing realistic, colorful characters
Building realistic, colorful characters might be my favorite part of the fiction writing process. There is a tiny piece of me in every character I create. SOME people (my husband) would say I am quite a colorful character myself. That's okay; what makes me colorful is also what makes me interesting—what makes me realistic.

Creating characters your fiction readers will wish to support and cheer on for 300+ pages is crucial. Let's discuss. 

TIPS for writing realistic, colorful characters:

1. Unless your character is named Bo Derek, she's not a perfect "10" (I'm dating myself, I know). We might want gorgeous hair, a stellar bod, a genius IQ, tons of $$$, and a winning personality, but perfect people don't exist in real life. Even a real person, who may seem perfect at first glance, will have a fault or insecurity lurking just below the flawless surface. Faults and insecurities are what make a character real and relatable. Identify such. Expose such. Use such.

2. A protagonist needs redeeming qualities. You've heard the phrase "gruff but lovable?" Make sure your protagonist isn't so fraught with faults and insecurities that he or she is unlikeable. A character must change from the beginning to the end of a story (character arc is a thing), but you don't want a character to be such a mess readers don't want to take that journey. If the protagonist has a foul mouth and prickly demeanor, create a balance. Have him or her do something to let the true character shine through. Adopt a side-kick from the local animal shelter? Maybe. Slip a $20 tip on the counter for the single mother bartender? Sure. You get the idea. 

3. Antagonists can have shades of good. Taking tips #1 & #2 one step further, realize that no character should be black or white, bad or good. Quoting one of my favorite musicals, "Ogres are like onions." Everyone has layers (even Shrek, who was definitely not the antagonist, despite many of the storybook characters originally thinking he was a big, bad, scary green dude). Unless a character is pure evil, he or she can have some good. That's what makes him human, interesting, relatable, and unpredictable.

4. Speaking of unpredictable, avoid stereotypes. Dumb jock. Brainy introvert. Vain beauty queen. Assumptions are made about certain people groups, even though there are just as many vain jocks, dumb introverts, and brainy beauty queens (see what I did there?). The point is to avoid stereotypes. Take your first idea of a character and spin the dial to something a few degrees left or right of what a reader expects. Change it up, and your character becomes much, much more interesting.

5. Actions speak louder than words. It's a trite phrase, but it's true. It is with the actions or reactions of characters that readers really get to know them. If your protagonist insists she hates music when asked to join the choir, but she sings solo in the shower every morning, we gain a clue to her true personality and some of those pesky insecurities. When writing fiction, be sure to use your character's actions to your advantage and as a way to add layers to the character and story.

6. Do your research. If you're writing for or about teens, you better have access to teens. Go to the mall. Watch your own children interact with their friends. Ask a teen to beta read your work. The same can be said of any specialized group of people you may be writing for or about, whether a beautician, widower, teacher, CEO, farmer, alcoholic, etc. Do whatever you can to familiarize yourself with and understand that character in a real-world setting, because you can't write what you don't know.

7. Know a character's language. Wooden or unnatural dialogue can quickly create a disconnect. Each character should have very distinctive patterns of speech, so it is obvious, even without a tag, that the dialogue came from a particular character. Example: in my working manuscript, I have a retired baseball player who calls his daughter "kid" and uses coaching lingo. I don't use this tactic in every bit of dialogue, but I've sprinkled it in enough that it's become synonymous with that character.

8. Don't allow a secondary character to steal the show. Everyone loves a larger-than-life character, but be careful a secondary character doesn't become a distraction and/or unbelievable caricature. Like in theater, the character who stumbles onstage in a crazy outfit, throws out a one-liner with exaggerated facial expressions and body movements, and just as quickly stumbles back off the stage can be great for a brief laugh and moment in the spotlight. However, if that same character is hamming it up in a group scene while the main character is doing a major life monologue, it can detract from readers getting to know something about the protagonist. 
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Anyway you write it, a character who is realistic and colorful can build a connection with his or her readers. YOUR readers. 

Good luck and write on!

As always, thanks for the artwork, Michelle Haas.

#CharacterDevelopment #WIP #Writer #MondayMotivation #WednesdayWisdom #WritingCommunity #AmWriting #AmEditing 


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Finding the joy and humor in your "home, sweet home" office

3/26/2020

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It's been over a month since I posted.

A lot has happened in that month—not all of it positive. In times like these, writing positively can seem almost impossible, but there is joy and humor to be found in navigating the "home, sweet home" office.

Here are some simple tricks for anyone working remotely, while sheltering in place during our time of social distancing.

Find the joy. Find the humor.

Finding the joy and humor in your home office

1. Get up. Get showered. Get dressed. As a writer who works from home 365 days a year, not just during a world crisis, I've learned that a normal going-to-the-office start to my day makes me infinitely more productive. Doing the basics (putting on pants ... any pants) helps me feel like a human, lifts my spirits, and gets me motivated.

2. Claim a space. Create your own private corner in which to work, even if it's in a spare closet of an unused bedroom. Avoid trying to work in common areas potentially needed by "co-workers" for television viewing, eating, sleeping, etc. Assume someone, at any time, may invade such areas (during filming of TikTok video featuring family dog lip-synching "Don't Stand So Close to Me").

3. Create a schedule. It's important to set a schedule for yourself, even if it's a loose list of manageable goals (alphabetizing query rejection letters). Without a plan, you're more likely to get distracted by the news or laundry or the third 1000-piece puzzle you've started on the kitchen table in the past two weeks.

4. But be flexible. Just as you should set a schedule, recognize that your co-workers are seeing a significant change in their own daily routine, as well, and may need some of your time (to build the blanket fort in the living room using the couch, two chairs, and every pillow and bedspread in the house). Remote workers with children may need to stretch the business day out, with family time built in every couple hours, as needed.

5. Communicate schedule to co-workers. Be they your 8-year-old daughter, elderly mother, or temporarily-out-of-work hubby, make sure your Corona roommates understand when you are working. Give them boundaries (crime scene tape across office door) and make it clear when you are unavailable (to play Mario Cart for the 30th time in 24 hours).

6. Take breaks and move. Take frequent breaks to clear your head and stretch. A home office should have a proper office chair, but many of the thrown together Corona home offices offer not-so-ergonomically-correct furniture. Save the back and get up and move (to Dance, Dance, Revolution with toddler) or take a quick run (to the corner mart for more toilet paper).

7. Eat meals with co-workers. Don't be tempted to breeze through lunch with just a yogurt at your desk. Whether you set aside the computer long enough to eat (the 25th box of Mac 'n Cheese) with your child or you Zoom a real co-worker with whom you'd normally share lunch (Wine Wednesday), it's good for both body and mind to take a noonday break and re-fuel. 

8. Leave work at the office. When you've had enough, turn off the computer and shut down your home office properly, so you can fully flip the switch and engage with your co-workers/roommates. You need that (happy hour while bing-watching "Modern Family") and so do they.

9. Enjoy a day off. When almost all of your hours in a week are spent in the same space, it can be hard to fully disengage from the home office. Don't forget to take a day off—FULLY—and engage in non-work-related activities in your home (family fashion show with old prom dresses/bridesmaid gowns).

Best of luck finding the joy and humor in your home, sweet home office!

#FridayFun #WritingBlog #WritingCommunity #Writer #WritingTips #WIP #AmWriting #ModernFamily
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The Week in the Life of a Freelance Writer

2/14/2020

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Freelance writing is never, ever dull.

As a member of the #WritingCommunity, the days often fly by. I am completely engaged by the process, the pressure, the people, and the positives of allowing my words to flow with color and creativity onto the page. 

But freelance writing isn't just about words.

Let's be real. 




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artwork by Michelle Haas


A Week in the Life ...

Monday — From my small, enclosed porch office with a stellar view of Lake Erie, I prepared materials for a writing presentation at the local library and sent out reminders to community Facebook groups and my writing email list. I updated my writing website, researched viable agents to #query, and spent several hours editing my current fiction manuscript. 
 
Not to put a glamorous spin on it, I also did three loads of laundry, sanitized two toilet bowls, scooped the cat litter box, walked the dog, and put away dishes … not necessarily in that order;).

Tuesday — I chatted about social media advertising with a local musician during lunch at a Rotary meeting. I spent the evening with businessmen/women and nonprofit volunteers, attempting to impart the tips and tricks I've learned about publicity writing. I gave them advice on how NOT to alienate local news sources when submitting press releases, something I learned through trial and error, a fair amount of red ink, and many years of listening to my past Pittsburgh news editor tell me her tales of woe.
 
I sort of organized my spice drawer. I mean really. Who needs three containers of paprika? I scooped the litter box. 
 
Wednesday — I researched interesting community members for future features I've been asked to write for a magazine. I also gave my motion graphics artist daughter feedback on a chapter of her "just for fun" fantasy work-in-progress (Michelle Haas ... I'm jealous you managed over 50,000 words in less than a month while taking art school classes. Seriously? Like, who does that without #NaNoWriMo on the calendar?). 
 
I got bread, milk, toilet paper, and M&Ms in preparation for a proposed snow storm, and I watched #Survivor. I scooped the litter box. 
 
Thursday — I line-edited a freelance project (whilst at my hair stylist's, and in between snips of DNA and color foils). I also researched specific questions about SEO in the “Search Engine Optimization for Dummies” book, so I can better "optimize" my own writing website and help future business clients improve website content. I made contact with two business owners who may need marketing help.
 
AND I started this writing blog and made a vat of sweet potato soup. Thursday was a very busy day. Thursday night, I scooped the litter box.
 
Friday — I wrote a press release about R.J. Norgard, a clever Lake Erie mystery author who used to be a counterintelligence officer and eventual private investigator in the beautiful 49th state of Alaska. Waaaay Coooool (Get it? Alaska is cold. I can now add dad joke-writing to my resume). I spent several hours editing my manuscript.
 
And did more laundry. And a toilet bowl. And the litter box.
 
This weekend will include more manuscript edits and a critique session with my writing group buddies & author Adam Hoss in Sandusky, OH. 
 
Yeah, the week in the life of a freelance writer is never dull. 
 
Sometimes, what I do isn't just about words, but I enjoy it ... infinitely more than scooping the litter box.

​Write on, my freelance friends!
 
#AmWriting #Blog #WritingBlog #WIP #WritingTips #FictionFriday #FearlessFriday #NaNoWriMo #Fantasy #AmEditing #SEO #FreelanceWriter #Freelance
 
Thanks for the cool graphics, Michelle Haas.

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Giving the keyboard a rest ... and thinking

12/18/2019

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I haven't added a word to my current work-in-progress in almost a month. Like a napping dog, I'm giving my keyboard a wide berth, allowing it a proper rest.

I'm hoping my manuscript will benefit from the hands-off approach and grow into something larger ... something worth chasing ... like a ball or stick or mail truck.

To recap, I participated in November's National Novel Writing Month. Upon meeting my goal of 50,000 words and getting the roughest of drafts down, I stopped writing "cold turkey" the day before Thanksgiving. Unlike many of my #NaNoWriMo peers, I chose not to push my word count higher, even though my women's fiction project will probably need at least another 20-30K words.

"Sutton's Second Chance" includes an addict's story. At the start, I didn't realize how emotionally draining this plot line would prove, and, though proud of my month-long accomplishment, I found myself glad to step away from the manuscript once I met my November goal. It's not that I didn't want to touch it again. Quite the opposite. At its bones, it's a story which must be told and heard. Exhausted, I simply wanted a chance to recover and enjoy the holidays with family. I intended to continue that writing break through until the end of the year and start again in January.

The joke was on me. The brain apparently didn't get the memo. It hasn't rested since Turkey Day. 

Though my keyboard hasn't produced any fiction in almost a month, I haven't stopped writing in my head. I haven't stopped thinking about my story. I've been working quite hard, actually, straightening out the kinks, firming up the plot, getting to know my characters, identifying missing chapters, and tossing half-formed ideas at my husband like hot potatoes from the oven — often randomly in the middle of the football game or an hour after turning off our bedside light. 

I'm a planner. When I start a project, I like to research and outline the basics, before I begin. That planning is a great start, but every project evolves once I'm in it. So much of my best "writing" is done away from my computer, after the bones of the story are down. I'm taking the time to let my brain catch up to what my heart poured out on the page. 

Each writer approaches a project in a different way, but every writer can benefit from a break from the keyboard. Every writer can benefit from time to think.

To be clear, I've been taking notes as my ideas surface. It's a terrifying, incredibly long, hand-written list of what I need to further research, change, eliminate, or add, when I finally decide to go back to the keyboard and begin again. It will take me months just to finish that first draft and likely a year to produce a draft worthy of a beta reader.

But I'm okay with that. My writing will be stronger for it and far more ready for an agent's eyes, someday, because I let my fledgling manuscript get a good rest like the napping dog. 


I am not a #NaNoWriMo writer who pushes to publish before the dust settles. I have no gripe with those writers, and many produce beautifully crafted first drafts. That's not me. My work needs time to mature—grow—while I'm away from the keyboard.

And thinking about EVERYTHING.

#NaNoWriMo2019 #WIP #WritingCommunity #AmWriting #Thinking #WomensFiction #Editing #AmEditing #LetItRest #WritingTip #WritingTips
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NaNoWriMo to the finish line

11/22/2019

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Why should you finish what you start?

I'll be perfectly frank. I have skated along, just doing what I needed to do to stay just above the daily goal line for #NaNoWriMo2019. Still, with the exception of Day #2, a planned non-writing day because of a classmate reunion, I have not missed a single day during this entire month. There were days I wrote 4,000 words. There were days I only wrote 400 words. The take away? Even though I haven't yet hit that magical 50K to "win" NaNoWriMo for the second year in a row, I will, MOST DEFINITELY, finish what I started.

I am currently sitting at about 45,000 words. 50K is doable, obviously. Not that far away, but it hasn't been easy. The process is exhausting, both mentally and physically.

If it's hard to find time in your day or you don't feel well or your car broke down or you're in the middle of a writer's block OR you're only a fraction done, it's still worth following through with #NaNoWriMo2019.

Here's why:
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1. "Almost" is nice, too. I worked really hard to prep for this, and I've written consistently the entire month. To give up would feel like wimping out. It's worth trying, even if I don't make it. I have written more in three weeks than I usually write in three months. No matter the final word count, it's more than I had when I started. It's writing progress. That's a win, in my book.

2. Finishing feels like a serious victory. Last year, I actually burst into tears of joy when I glanced down at my word count and realized I had jumped right over that 50K mark without even noticing. Goals aren't always easy to meet, but getting there tastes so sweet. So, so, so sweet.

2. The story is worth the time. When I jumped right over 50K (without noticing), I was in the middle of a really tense ending scene. I was in the zone, baby. It was good stuff. It was a story that needed to be told, not just because I wanted to get to a certain word count, but because the story was solid and worth spending a month to tell. I went on to spend many, many more months editing and lengthening that story. It WAS worth the telling and is now in the final draft stage. My 2019 project, the sequel, is equally important to me. It's a story that needs told.

3. I said I would. Any goal, once it's out there, is a goal to be achieved or tossed away, like so many promises in the wind. I said I would finish. It took a lot of effort to get even close, so not seeing it through—not trying my best every single day left in the month—would feel like a goal lost for the wrong reasons.

4. I'm on a roll. I finished last year for the first time. I'll finish this year, because I want to prove 2018 wasn't a fluke. It wasn't. Trust me ... there's no going back now:)

Don't give up. Keep trying. Finish what you start. I'm rooting for you. You've got this. 

Write on, my #NaNoWriMo friends. I'll meet you at the finish line!

#NaNoWinner2019 #WIP #SCBWI #writingtip #writers #winner #fiction #WritingCommunity #MondayMotivation
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NaNoWriMo: Not too late to take the chance

10/27/2019

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You can do it.

It's 
NaNoWriMo time. As we close in on Friday, Nov. 1, and the start of National Novel Writing Month (with the goal of writing 50,000 words in 30 days), here are some thoughts on my process and what you can do in less than a week to prepare to write that story keeping you up at night.

Don't think you have it in you to write a first draft in a month? Haven't done anything to prep? These shortcuts can make starting that writing project on Nov. 1 less overwhelming. It's not too late to take the chance! 

LAST MINUTE tricks to prepare for NaNoWriMo:

1. Create an account. Without a NaNoWriMo account, you won't really feel bound to pursue your goal. It takes only a few minutes to sign up, and it's free. Having a live account will give you a nudge to commit. Even if you choose not to follow through, the website is brimming with writing tips. 

2. Brainstorm plots/settings centered around something/somewhere already familiar to you. You don't HAVE to write what you know, but, in the case of NaNoWriMo, writing within your knowledge base and/or in a setting you've been to will reduce research and help you get off to a quick start. 

3. Get to know your characters. Listen to the voices in your head. Take just a couple hours to create mini character profiles of those you'd like to include in your story. Give each character his or her own page in your notebook and jot down potential names, what they look like, age, occupation, any connection you'd like them to have to other characters, interesting mannerisms, speech patterns, how they dress, etc. This is tons of fun. Through character profiles you can actually get ideas for conflict and plotting (and sub-plotting) for your story. 

4. Set it up. Where do you want this to take place? What time of year? Whether it is a place you've been to many times before or someplace completely fictional, write down the basics of your setting. Town? Region? State? Planet? If it helps, sketch a map of the surroundings. If the setting is real, create a folder on your laptop to stash various links that will help you pull facts in later, as you need them, to make your representation of the setting more realistic. An easy option is to go to the area's Visitors Bureau website, which may provide historical information and photos.

5. Create a SHORT plot synopsis. Once you've got some interesting characters to play with and a place to let them play, jot down potential "What if..." scenarios that allow your characters to interact. Which scenario interests you most? Which would be easiest to write without a lot of research? Which creates the most conflict? Once you hone in on the plot you want to pursue, attempt to write a short 1-2 paragraph synopsis. Like the back cover of your favorite book, this synopsis should not be too long but with enough details to draw a reader in. 

6. Glimpse the beginning, middle, and end. Just because many planner-type NaNoWriMo participants have taken all of October to fully prep for the big event—spread sheets, blocked off calendar, play list, 30 page synopsis, and a brand new coffee mug—doesn't mean you, a "pantser"-type, can't be successful flying by the seat of your drawers. Just try to have some general idea of how you want your story to start, what specific actions/plot points might happen midway through the story, and some sense of what happens to end the story. In other words, what is your point A and point B and what possible pitfalls will your characters see/experience when traveling down their path from one point to the other? 

That's it, really. With the above steps, you've got a base. I can guarantee, those characters are likely to take a few wild turns off the path, and they might even send you down a completely unexpected rabbit hole, but at least you'll have some sense of where you'd like to go. That's all you need to participate in NaNoWriMo. It's all I had last year, and my 2018 project not only made it to 50K words but is now fully fleshed out, edited, and in the hands of beta readers. 

Just do it. It's not too late to take the chance.

For more tips, check out my Oct. 3, 2018 blog post on prepping for NaNoWriMo.

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NaNoWriMo: ready for another challenge

10/8/2019

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Sutton's Second Chance
by Brenda A. Haas

It's 10 years since Charlotte Sutton and her half-brother Adam came to terms with each other's existence in the little Lake Erie waterfront town of Lakeside, Ohio. 11 years since their father Chuck began fading away as quickly as the short term memory of an Alzheimer's patient. 14 years since Adam's mother, a drug addict and a felon, dropped her teenage son on Chuck's cottage doorstep. 

Now Adam's mother is clean, out of prison, and wants a second chance at being part of Adam's life. But Adam no longer believes in second chances. With the help of those who love him, Adam must find his way back to the roots only a small town, and a small town family, can offer.

Yep, I'm doing it again. I'm taking the challenge.

National Novel Writing Month, NaNoWriMo, is November, and I'm prepping for my next novel, "Sutton's Second Chance," what I hope will be the sequel to my 2018 effort, "Charlotte's Choice" (now called "Sutton's Choice").

The goal of NaNoWriMo is to write 50,000 words, or essentially a short novel, in one month. I did that last year by the skin of my teeth with 50,497 words and a day to spare. I was so into writing the final chapter of my rough, rough, rough, rough draft, I didn't notice jumping over the 50k mark (and my "win") until several hundred words beyond my goal. I literally burst into tears when I realized I'd crossed that line. 

That is a feeling well worth recreating. I broke down a fiction writing barrier with NaNoWriMo 2018. Not only did I meet my goal, I spent 11 months cleaning up the mess that was my first draft. Four drafts later, "Sutton's Choice" is complete at about 70,000 words and now in the hands of beta readers. Once their comments come in, I'll be diving back in and hope to have a viable final draft ready by next spring, so I can start sending to lit agents. 

NaNoWriMo was such a game-changer for me, I hope to keep the momentum going in 2019. Here are 6 reasons why NaNoWriMo is worth the time, even if the result is a messy,  ugly first draft.

1. I wrote to get the story down. I did not have time to second guess every word and tweak my writing as I went. I had to GET IT DOWN, and worry about the nuances of it later. This allowed me to try new things and stop analyzing my every thought. Overall, I believe this process was more organic, and the writing felt more natural.

2. It gave me a goal with very concrete deadlines. I love a challenge, and NaNoWriMo is definitely that. For anyone with a full or part-time job, it becomes even more so. I decided to do NaNoWriMo because I work best when I have a deadline. I take due dates seriously, so not following through with this would have been a fail for me.

3. It made my writing public. "Announcing" I was doing NaNoWriMo nudged me to follow through. By going public with my short synopsis and keeping my readers apprised of my word count progress, I knew I had to prove (to myself and everyone else) that I could finish. Obviously, I'm following that same principle in 2019.:)

4. I felt a part of something. Writing can be a lonely sport. Writing during NaNoWriMo is like going to a month-long writing workshop at which you can ask anyone anything at anytime, via the Internet and Facebook NaNoWriMo groups, and probably get multiple answers to your question ... plus tons of encouragement that you are doing great. NaNoWriMo is a wonderful support system.

5. It provided a rhythm to my writing. In the past, I'd sit down to a chapter written the day before and feel the need to back up and edit ... sometimes entire chapters at a time. Because of the time crunch of NaNoWriMo, I only allowed myself to back up and edit 1-2 pages each day. That way I'd get my editing fix in without taking hours out of my writing time. This also allowed me to get back into the rhythm of the story, so I could go full steam ahead with something new each day. Essentially, NaNoWriMo made me a more efficient writer.

6. I finished. Messy or not, I completed a first draft of a novel, something many writers say they'd like to do, think they can do, should find the time to do, but never do. I DID do it. Though it was rough, rough, rough, the first draft of Sutton's Choice was something to be proud of, and the final draft is just around the corner. I have NaNoWriMo to thank.

NaNoWriMo is not for everyone, but for those of us that can look past the mess that is that first draft, and see the nugget of gold beneath the ugly, the process is totally worth the time and effort.

Good luck and happy writing!

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    Brenda Haas lived in the Pittsburgh, PA area for over 20 years and moved to Lake Erie with her husband in early 2018. She has two grown daughters and way too many pets.

    A columnist for Pittsburgh area's Penn Franklin News Publishing Company, her "A Little Bit of Life" essays provided a snapshot of being a parent, wife and independent woman who attracts the "quirky" in everyday living. She has also been published in the Pittsburgh Post-Gazette, the Pittsburgh Tribune-Review, and My Outer Banks Home magazine.

    Brenda currently freelances for various businesses and non-profits and is well-versed in public relations and marketing.

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    "Hells of Southgate"
    "Forest for the Trees"

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